1: “Naked” literary device Make sure to use an adjective to describe the literary device
2: Spelling Error
3: Incomplete Response Look at the AP prompt; did you discuss both the town and its people?
4: Word Choice Does this word’s meaning or connotation fit your sentence?
5: Tense Error Use the literary present tense.
6: Avoid Quotes Save quotes for your body/analysis paragraphs, not for the intro paragraph
7: Adjective/Description Needed Describe the town or the people more
8: POV Error Avoid first person or second person pronouns
9: Vague Pronoun Restructure sentence to remove pronoun or clarify antecedent
2: Spelling Error
3: Incomplete Response Look at the AP prompt; did you discuss both the town and its people?
4: Word Choice Does this word’s meaning or connotation fit your sentence?
5: Tense Error Use the literary present tense.
6: Avoid Quotes Save quotes for your body/analysis paragraphs, not for the intro paragraph
7: Adjective/Description Needed Describe the town or the people more
8: POV Error Avoid first person or second person pronouns
9: Vague Pronoun Restructure sentence to remove pronoun or clarify antecedent